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straw me down … like your raspberry ice tea swallow and savor and maybe I’ll say I love you maybe not … either way it’s your last - the swan song of my jaded patience … claw me cautiously write contempt in my lats dig dermal furrows and take me home beneath your nails a parting gift - a vermillion tattoo to stick to my best linen Armani … pain, no charge in fact … screw the prudence - why start now? let your passionate disregard go nuts it’s but flesh, after all your favorite carnal cabbage and you spend it faster than you covet … I’m in the black in that regard and you can no longer be keeper of the riches … I’m spent - figuratively … and figuratively and you are Chapter 11 find some other bloody coins to cover your eyes and rest … in pieces. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, August 26, 2024

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Date: 11/7/2024 1:45:00 AM
Dear greg, its so good to see you post; and as always one that flows with such creative wordplay and imagery! With poignant metaphors! You really always write such awe inspring poems and poignant poems: i especially love how youv written “ the swan song of my jaded patience … claw me cautiously“ brilliant! “ I’m spent - figuratively “ a very honest and soulful poem that depicts exhaustion and so many emotions. the ending is impeccable! Pleasure reading this heartfelt poem! Sending you light~
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/7/2024 2:31:00 AM
Oh thank you so very kindly, my friend, this means more than I can say, as I rarely even get noticed here … it’s so nice that someone still appreciates my work, and I’m glad you liked this one! Blessings! (I have a new book out, published by Wheelsong Books in the Uk). <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/7/2024 2:31:00 AM
I hope you are well!

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