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August 22, 2026

Bangles on her Arms

My grandmother passed on her untarnished eight bangles to my mother,
My mother passed on the same exquisite bangles to me,
I asked my daughter when she got married “do you want these bangles?”
She said “These are pretty, but too tiny for me  - I won’t be able to wear them.”

The jeweller had a suggestion-
After all, they are all precious metals! Twenty-four carat! 
He turned those unadulterated gold into an elegant necklace.
My heart sank parting with those ornate pieces, 
which connected me with the women, 
who paved my way so that 
I did not have to live the life they did.  

Now those bangles shine only on a picture of me in a wedding dress!
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Rose  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:03 AM
This is so very touching Mala, heirlooms, sigh.. I have my moms gold plater feather she had it since she was a young woman, now she passed away and it sits on my altar next to my angel and Mary. Love to you, blessed Lady, friend of mine xo
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 7:19 AM
Dear Vienna, I feel so honoured to read your inspiring comment. Heirlooms are so valuable to us because we feel the presence of our ancestors who used to possess them. I can imagine how precious your mom's gold plated feather to you ! Thank you so much Dear Vie, My Lovely Kindest Friend!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 1:45 PM
I love family heirlooms and your poem about your family's heirloom is touching. wishing you well.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 3:13 PM
Thank you, Sara. Yes, Sara, I feel very touched about family heirlooms. Actually my family had to leave many of them behind when they migrated to another country. My mother told us stories about the pieces she remembered, and I used to visualize in my mind. 🥰
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