Bang Crash Crackles

Oh no, that time of year again
when I hear noises in my head
My owner tries to comfort me
snuggling, huddling, nurturing
but I just want the noise to stop
such loudness is so torturing
She plays her music loudly
hoping this will stop my trembling
The only sounds that I can hear
are sounds I am remembering
For I was found on Guy Fawkes night
so many years ago
Tied to a fence with no escape
weak and starving of food and love
As all around me fireworks sounded
noise so frightening feeling hounded
Lighting up the skies with sounds
Bang  Crash  Crackles
Whizz  Whoosh  Whistles
Bathed in panic and starved of love
Scared by sounds of a million missiles
Even though the sound’s abating
cannot stop myself from shaking
My lovely owner soothing me
whispering comforting words
As gradually my panting stops
my heartbeat slows right down
For I’ve survived another year
the banging ceased I have no fear


Written for all the dear animals so frightened by the noise of fireworks
2nd November 2018

Contest Choice 10 Personification 
Sponsor  Brian Strand 
1ST PLACE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/20/2019 10:05:00 PM
Your captivating poem fills me with empathy, Ann. Beautifully done. I've often wondered how terrifying it must all be for animals during a fireworks display. Your compassionate heart shines brightly. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/21/2019 12:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan for your wonderful comments and congratulations for my win in Brian's contest. I have witnessed the absolute terror from my darling bulldog Bill (sadly now gone) who could really not be consolled whilst all the banging and crashing was going on, bless him! I really appreciate your friendly visit Susan - thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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