Bandita Beauty -

A Valentine Write For My One & Only Street Angel -

I met you in a town of a thousand hustles,
a big stage supporting a million words,
a large world where the hunted & hunter interchange desires,
our souls touched eachother electrically, gently
long before compliments & reasons garnished the billboards,
you were an invisible passion simmering within me,
you've become a woman strengthening my very Being,

creation is the ambition that excites us most,
revelations and truisms scampering and giggling
up and down the streets, all about the universe,
angels couldn't ignore us even if they wanted to, wings with no frost,
Poetry, our vehicle for adventure, the stich to our begining,
on this Valentine's Day I need you to be mine, with Love unrehearsed -

J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/15/2014 1:40:00 AM
Your one and only must have loved this write, Justin. Amazing. Lovely to inspire such writing in you. She must be divine.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/15/2014 12:43:00 PM
Her love for me is not over Eileen...she is my Divine secret, my secret diamond. J.A.B.
Date: 4/20/2014 5:59:00 PM
This is a beautiful write. You had me enraptured today. I hope to hear more from you soon. with love, and missing you - Jay
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/2/2014 8:48:00 PM
Missin you too Jay. J.A.B.
Date: 4/5/2014 11:30:00 PM
This is truly beautiful. Bringin it down to right wherethe heart beats. very nice. Blessings, ~Teresa
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/6/2014 1:21:00 PM
Yes Teresa, Creation begins in the heart, and flourishes on stage, improved no less. Thanks! J.A.B.
Date: 3/30/2014 1:49:00 PM
A wonderful ode to your bandita. Loved this. Keep up the good work.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/2/2014 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Joanna, my Bandita keeps me creatin, moves me rightly. J.A.B.
Date: 2/18/2014 6:10:00 PM
Hello Justin really enjoyed this wild write hope you are well..'
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/19/2014 2:28:00 PM
Yes Joe, everyday is a marvel with lots of vitality, thanks. My muse is surely wild! J.A.B.
Date: 2/18/2014 10:51:00 AM
Unique J A B., a poem and a world where you see an artist for what she is. Lovely. SKAT
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/19/2014 2:30:00 PM
She's a real dream no doubt!!!!! J.A.B.
Date: 2/17/2014 7:19:00 PM
nice to read
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/19/2014 2:32:00 PM
Its a connection my friend! J.A.B.
Date: 2/15/2014 7:40:00 PM
This was absolutely beautiful-a very powerful dedication. Thanks for continuing to share your mesmerizing talent. Loved every line equally, can't choose a favorite! Always, Laura (:
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/17/2014 1:23:00 AM
Laura this valentine is all about having the courage to obey desire, to love the puzzle that is life. I thank you for being a great listener. J.A.B.
Date: 2/14/2014 1:12:00 PM
- Beautiful, Justin ! - HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thank you Anne. She gave me beautiful hope, and emotion on this Valentine's Day. J.A.B.
Date: 2/14/2014 12:44:00 PM
Justin, lovely in every way. A poem to cherish for all days to come. I like the Street Angel theme. Love how you speak to her... Always in your corner... Linda the sweet Poet Destroyer
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2014 10:27:00 AM
I love speaking to her, can't get enough of that Street Angel voice. I like to think of you being on the center stage of my dreams PD., Happy Valenti e's Day. J.A.B.
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