Banana

I hope I am appealing to you See I am big and yellow not blue You hunger for sweets I could be your eats You pealed and ate me all up ~ who knew

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/21/2023 10:23:00 AM

Back with big congratulations Paula! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Banana" write. Have a fun day........................

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/18/2023 8:16:00 PM

This limerick really made me smile, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:01:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad my fun "Banana" write made you smile. That makes me happy. I love to give out smiles. Have a fun day........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/18/2023 3:11:00 PM

Paula, Congratulations on your well deserved win, my friend, your Limerick was excellent.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 10:58:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you found my fun "Banana" write to be an excellent Limerick. You put a smile on my heart. It was fun writing this one. Have a fun day........................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2023 1:50:00 PM

Paula, cute and creative, congratulations on your winning placement!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you found my fun "Banana" write cute/creative. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun day........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2023 12:46:00 PM

"2 Place" ~ Banana ~ Date Written: 7/31/2023

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2023 3:55:00 AM

Ahh!! This could be used to appeal to children who won't eat fruits. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 9:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Banana" write. Never thought about it appealing to children who won't eat fruits. Have a fun day........................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/2/2023 7:33:00 PM

Oh, Paula. Such a tease this is. Tee-hee. (Meet me at..._

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 9:42:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Banana" limerick write. Have a fun day........................

Michael Tor

Date: 8/2/2023 11:29:00 AM

Nicely written Paula I am going to have one now, you have inspired me to do so. God bless you today...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 9:40:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad my fun "Banana" limerick write inspired you. I had one for breakfast. I wish you would write more. I love to read your writes. Hope all is OK at your end. Have a fun day........................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 7:48:00 AM

This tickled me Paula! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 9:37:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad my fun write tickled you. That makes me happy. Have a fun day........................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/2/2023 1:58:00 AM

Cute and fun, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found my fun write to be cute/fun. It was fun to write. Have a fun day........................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2023 1:55:00 PM

So cute and whimsicsl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found my fun write to be cute. I enjoyed writing it. Have a fun day........................

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/1/2023 1:47:00 PM

Cute, fun poem Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 9:32:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found my fun limerick write to be cute/fun. Have a fun day........................

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/1/2023 6:09:00 AM

Terrific! Congratulations on your funny, clever limerick. Cheers, Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2023 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found my fun limerick write to be clever. "Cheers" Have a fun day........................

Deb M

Date: 7/31/2023 5:54:00 PM

Love it Paula and love the humble Narnie!! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you love my fun write. Have a fun day........................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 7/31/2023 5:09:00 PM

I smiled as I read your fun limerick Paula and I love how it reminds us to eat more healthy sweet treats like bananas :-) Enjoy your evering my friend xox

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun limerick write. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" That makes me happy. Have a fun day........................