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Bamboo Lady

I awoke to the pressure Pushing me inward this morning. Sticky. Moist air immersing me In sodden memories. Blast from the past. Humid awakenings from a life No longer mine. Rusty time. Displaced. Confused. Spinning. The shoe and not the foot. Not striding forward in confidence But trod upon. Sole flapping in weary protest. Every motion orchestrated for Survival. No revival. I think I shall become "Bamboo Lady." Roses lost with my past. No hothouse plant but green, Swaying with the changes. Common woman thriving on Nutrients and water. Alive And learning. by Mari Sloan copyright 2011

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Date: 8/4/2011 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Mari. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Well written and very interesting to read. Well done.
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:50:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Mari
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Mari. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 4:24:00 AM
congrats Mary on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:37:00 AM
very fine!
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:06:00 AM
I especially like the last four lines..Common woman or ordinary woman..Good to read your work..Sara
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