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I do not hear you with my brain which cannot kick in unless my heart jumpstarts her and my heart is not hearing you Brain does not comprehend until the soul yells “yes” this happens infrequently. there is no rhyme or method to it. it is not a planned event. I can read two hundred poems without hearing you because Brain is sleeping. dreaming of other worlds, imagining her next poem then BAM! Someone's words cause my soul to do a wild Watusi dance. suddenly the heart and the mind tango. we shimmer, shake and slide, brain, mind and soul. we finally hear you and see you clearly.

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Date: 4/19/2021 9:10:00 PM
You are the original Hawaiian Hula Girl, my friend. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/20/2021 5:07:00 PM
I can be but it could quickly change too
Date: 4/18/2021 11:42:00 AM
Caren, 'I can read two hundred poems' ~~ 'then BAM!' And it was just like you said. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/18/2021 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Richard I know that's "write"
Date: 4/17/2021 1:10:00 PM
I think this is often true of poets, Caren. Our brains do not comprehend until the "soul yells 'yes'". Good writing.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2021 5:51:00 PM
My soul reacts to writing way before my mind comprehends it

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