Balm

Morning sun putting 
balm on the green leaf margin
Beetle-chewed whole night
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9/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ogundare Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 4:16 PM
You painted the picture really well with your words...
Gupta Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Thank you ...
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December 10, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Phenomenal imagery Probir, nice!
Gupta Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Thanx, Paloma ...
Trifiatis Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Captivating, dear Probir! I am back my friend and feel better!
Gupta Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Thank you ... Missing your nice monokus ...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Unique image, Probir! I like it!
Gupta Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Thank you ...
Stebbings Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 5:14 AM
Lovely image in this Haiku, Probir. // Barry
Gupta Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Barry ...
Balandi Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 5:09 AM
Excellent poem.
Gupta Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 5:12 AM
So sharp a reply! ... Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 2:19 AM
Ah, the beautiful balance of nature's dance. Great haiku!
Gupta Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 4:56 AM
Thank you ...
Daniel Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Aha! Love the image, simply beautiful:)
Gupta Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:23 AM
I am glad you like the image ... the beetle keeps gnawing ... Thank you ...
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