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Balm

Morning sun putting balm on the green leaf margin Beetle-chewed whole night ______________________________________ 9/12/2016

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Date: 12/11/2016 4:16:00 PM
You painted the picture really well with your words...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 8:43:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/10/2016 11:23:00 AM
Phenomenal imagery Probir, nice!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 12:06:00 AM
Thanx, Paloma ...
Date: 12/10/2016 5:41:00 AM
Captivating, dear Probir! I am back my friend and feel better!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/10/2016 7:14:00 AM
Thank you ... Missing your nice monokus ...
Date: 12/9/2016 7:32:00 AM
Unique image, Probir! I like it!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/9/2016 5:14:00 AM
Lovely image in this Haiku, Probir. // Barry
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Barry ...
Date: 12/9/2016 5:09:00 AM
Excellent poem.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 5:12:00 AM
So sharp a reply! ... Thank you ...
Date: 12/9/2016 2:19:00 AM
Ah, the beautiful balance of nature's dance. Great haiku!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/8/2016 11:34:00 PM
Aha! Love the image, simply beautiful:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 12:23:00 AM
I am glad you like the image ... the beetle keeps gnawing ... Thank you ...