Balm

Morning sun putting balm on the green leaf margin Beetle-chewed whole night ______________________________________ 9/12/2016

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Date: 12/11/2016 4:16:00 PM

You painted the picture really well with your words...

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 8:43:00 PM

Thank you ...

Date: 12/10/2016 11:23:00 AM

Phenomenal imagery Probir, nice!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 12:06:00 AM

Thanx, Paloma ...

Date: 12/10/2016 5:41:00 AM

Captivating, dear Probir! I am back my friend and feel better!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/10/2016 7:14:00 AM

Thank you ... Missing your nice monokus ...

Date: 12/9/2016 7:32:00 AM

Unique image, Probir! I like it!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 9:16:00 AM

Thank you ...

Date: 12/9/2016 5:14:00 AM

Lovely image in this Haiku, Probir. // Barry

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 5:18:00 AM

Thank you, Barry ...

Date: 12/9/2016 5:09:00 AM

Excellent poem.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 5:12:00 AM

So sharp a reply! ... Thank you ...

Date: 12/9/2016 2:19:00 AM

Ah, the beautiful balance of nature's dance. Great haiku!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 4:56:00 AM

Thank you ...

Date: 12/8/2016 11:34:00 PM

Aha! Love the image, simply beautiful:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 12:23:00 AM

I am glad you like the image ... the beetle keeps gnawing ... Thank you ...