Ballet Dancers At the Music School - From a Neighborhood Child

BALLET DANCERS AT THE MUSIC SCHOOL

Like a field of mountain flowers
Arching    bending    tip-toeing
The music?
A wonderful waltz
By Tschaikowsky
The girls
So slender
So light
Expressionless and swift

But then!
Laughing
Dash into the hallway
Costumes
Green    red    yellow
Bright white
I smile with
Mild delight

AT ONCE!
A tall    green weed
Chewing gum
Glares
Clear through me
“Get lost    PUNK!”
They bang the door
Fill the air with
Their sweaty leotards
Swan Lake continues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/21/2011 9:47:00 AM
,Good morning,~ Daver ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up*. By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.
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Date: 10/15/2011 3:12:00 AM
wonderful. I could really picture this little story as I was reading it. HEy, I sent you several messages from hotmail. I am getting YOURS but I think you are not getting mine. DANG!!!
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Date: 10/13/2011 1:30:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments on LIGHT, Dave. I'll be sure to return in kind more often... take care, Hussain
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:53:00 PM
Humorous write here dear poet ! I enjoyed very much, it was quite tangible sir ! Have a wonderful day Dave....much love, james
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