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Sedoka
Sedoka is a Japanese verse form that evolved from ancient songs. They can be mood poems, similar to Tanka, or they can tell stories in the manner of a song. Sedoka consist of 6 lines of 5-7-7-5-7-7 syllables respectively. Each 5-7-7 unit is called a katauta. Traditionally, the second Katauta says the same thing as the first katauta, although in a different way. In modern English the syllable count is somewhat more flexible, and there is usually a turn, or change in direction, in lines 3 and 5. The turn in line 3 is sharp, and  in line 5 more gentle.

 

Precious counter-weights ships utilized for sailing, ballast stones got dumped offshore. But in empty hulls sailors found common boulders held incalculable worth. (Sedoka) 03/14/2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Title Chosen - "Ballast"

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Date: 3/14/2020 8:40:00 PM
Not your usual style but impeccable like all of your poetry my friend.
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Date: 3/15/2020 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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