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Bali On the Morning Breeze

Of the morning The dry season breaks Clouds open And the rains Comes down From the nor east The breeze It brings Bali mornings I feel I hear I smell Bali On the morning Breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/3/2021 11:25:00 AM
I liked this poem at first read. Like a cherry pie, it is filled with delicious ingredients. It has muse and motion. I specifically like lines 11 thru 14. I am fortunate to experience this Bali morning.
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Date: 4/2/2021 11:34:00 AM
Simplistic but beautiful! It reveals your gratefulness for the rain to break the spell of dryness.
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 7/10/2021 10:49:00 PM
Deborah, you sound like a true Territorian. may our spirits meet out on country. Kind regards
Date: 4/2/2021 9:55:00 AM
What a pretty piece. I like the mood you created.
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 7/10/2021 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Richard, secretly, i like what i create to. Kind regards

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