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Balassi Stanza - Man On the Moon

MAN ON THE MOON ............................... the blue moon I sighted. indeed was delighted! I saw a man eating cheese, he was, he waved, hello. moon blue, his cheese yellow, indeed, he was signing, please? my telescope was large, he signed, want bread and marge. I tell lies, I love to tease! ...............................................
This was written for the poems for a 7year old contest, I lost my way. The Rhyme Scheme is: bbaccadda Syllable count is: 6/6/7/6/6/7/6/6/7

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Date: 2/13/2018 3:37:00 PM
...want bread and marge :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/13/2018 4:28:00 PM
LOL, Not, sure, are you thinking 'Marge', as in a female name? You'd be wrong; marge. is an abbreviated form of margarine, a butter substitute in the UK. (goes nicely with bread and cheese), still laughing... Mick

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