Balancing the Senses

This sitting takes me to an attic of raw light
bestowing foams of quiet glow for travelers 
unyielding to a precise compass
of direction, a spaceless space 
nourished as it were, losing the self 
to Bodhi-like clouds 
and nomadic lotus spreads.
 I release this soul
buried in the kundalini to a congregation 
of ambient tunes saying nothing,
taking flight unto a hymn of
unknown obedience moved by elemental
balance: no more weight or cities divided,
united by forms of one, one core.
My malleable flesh dissolves into tiny

breaths; it comes and leaves with
floating grace ascending the next chi ,
as  I go deep, deeper… high, higher
centering second, fourth, seventh chakra
until this my body- mind- spirit  marries
in a ceremony of  calm traversing zones
unnamed by time, one with all senses,
bliss or regrets… the airiness of journeying
through this unshaped season fed by something
unbidden in my life so blessed.
I step outside my body, somewhere…
without a trace that realms chop my head,
searching for a mantra of stars… stillness fed.


* chi – life energy * kundalini--a force which ordinarily rests at the base of the spine. *chakras-major centers of spiritual power Roy Jerden’s Religious Poetry: Non-Christian Buddhism 10/18/2014
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Garg Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 1:26 AM
Very creative and inspiring piece of art, especially the second half. Many many congrats.......................... :D
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October 25, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Incredible write Nette. Congrats on the win
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October 24, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Nice and wonderful presentation...Great work....Congrats on your well deserved win..
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October 24, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Congrats. Nette, on the win and for your choice of the theme of YOGA. It is not exclusive to Budhism which is but an offshoot of Hinduism.All the masters of Yoga like Patanjali and the Sidhas lived long before the Budha.
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October 23, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Absolutely superb Nette many congrats on your podium place right at the top:-) hugs Jan xxx
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October 22, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Big congratulations on your solo super win my very dear friend Nette! Biggest hugs and cheers! I extremely enjoyed your outstanding masterpiece! Thank you so much. love lots, Leonora
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October 22, 2014 at 9:35 PM
Congratulations Nette.. :) as always..................... :D! miss you.. hugs and hugs mwah. :D!
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October 22, 2014 at 9:28 PM
a wonderful pen Nette congrats on win hugs
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October 22, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Another masterful write nette. Congratulations on your first place win overall.
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October 22, 2014 at 5:44 PM
This contest was worth doing if only because you might not have written this poem otherwise... A true masterpiece. Congratulations!
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October 22, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on your top of the podium first place win. This all sounds so peaceful Nette
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October 22, 2014 at 12:06 PM
- Your poem on top of the winners' !!!! - Congratulations my friend, Nette !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 22, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Beautifully expressed poem, nette, congrats on the win
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October 20, 2014 at 4:17 PM
really love how penned this piece nette golden pen dear friend
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October 20, 2014 at 3:19 PM
Your mysticism is merry in blooming energy, your chakras ancient in twirling youth Nette! Crown chakra is alight in you, "Attic of raw light...Malleable flesh dissolves into tiny breaths...Mantra of stars...AWESOME! From macro to micro to sight to flight, this poem is a bona fide teaching Nette...J.A.B.
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October 20, 2014 at 8:23 AM
It is with a tranquil spirit that in quiet surrender of the moment a wonderful transformation takes place. Your poetic talent glows! This is a favored verse, Nette
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October 20, 2014 at 2:23 AM
Excellent. beautifully said. Enjoyed. Tfs
Parker Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:21 PM
I know nothing of the religions Peter mentions, I do know the universe is a circle of birth and rebirth.I know between the violent upheaveal of nature is peace.I comprehend the beauty you find in the stillness and wish it washed down upon all humanity, to give comfort for the insanityof mankind...good luck and may peace be with you my poetic friend
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October 19, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work. Also for the information about other religious beliefs...Thanks for the visit to my page..I did jam those ends..Almost like a jammed biscuit..Sara
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October 19, 2014 at 12:51 PM
In stillness the kundalini unfolds, raising upwards the chaKras, opening one after the other till we start seeing with our third eye at which point the divine chakra waits to open to a world of beauty unimaginable by the non-initiate! Great work dear Nette!
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October 19, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Nette, So neat and so wonderful and so beautifully written. The meditation work at hand in putting this fantastic poem together is quite obvious. I absolutely marvel at the way you constructed this light poetry write with all of the interweaved meditative detail. Extraordinary work here Nette!! A "7" from me!! And Best of Luck in the contest!! You have a winner here in my opinion. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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October 19, 2014 at 7:57 AM
- So beautifully written, Nette ..... to see, touch and perceive through all the senses - Luck in contest! - Happy Sunday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 19, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Relaxing! awesome the balance in your poem, good luck in the contest. :)
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