Baking Cookies

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To my older sister, she would bake cookies and we ( actually just me )would eat them all, right out of the oven....Sorry Sis

How, I see you contemplating Mixing stirring rolling shaking And forever carefully taking Not to spill some on the floor In the bowl you're tightly holding With a spoon you're gently folding And with both hands you start molding Molding as you have before Then to the oven, you will take it And we'll wait while you now bake it But our eager eyes can't fake it If we eat one we'll want more As the sweet smell fills the rafters You know what we are really after With a loud but nervous laughter You sweep us all right out the door

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Sharon Gulley

Date: 9/29/2020 6:09:00 PM

I love it, Jerry.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/12/2020 12:49:00 PM

Great story here Jerry, Perfect rhythm, rhyme and imagery. Brings back memories of me baking for my family when they were young. God Bless, JB

Jessica Thompson

Date: 5/19/2020 4:02:00 PM

Jerry this poem is so fantastically written! I really do love your writing, and it has been so long since I read it. Hope you are well my friend. Keep doing your thing! Jess

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/20/2020 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Jess I really appreciate your time to read and comment on my poems , your words are always encouraging.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/12/2020 7:02:00 PM

Hello Jerry … brought back memories. Mum would cook mushrooms on top of our wood stove and us kids gobbled them down before she hardly took them off the spatula - thank you Jerry - Lindsay

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/20/2020 9:00:00 AM

Ya'know.....I thought I've lived life, but until I have a mushroom cooked on top of a wood stove I find myself totally unprepared to meet my maker ....just yet. Thanks Mate

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/2/2020 2:18:00 PM

Hello Jerry T. Curtis, there is nothing like baked cookies coming out from the oven. It is better than store bought cookies. Have a nice day my friend, So nice to meet you.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/20/2020 9:02:00 AM

Thank you Darlene, You so right, and it seems to me....store bought are getting worse. Thank Darlene for your comment

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2020 4:32:00 AM

what wonderful memories the smell of home baking is so comforting... we got a surprise delivery of a little box of cakes from a charity we work for - couldnt have come at a better time as Id just come back from a hospital appointment which Id not been looking forward to - but all good:-) hope you and your loved ones are well:-) hugs jan xx

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/20/2020 9:05:00 AM

I hope you are safe and well.....and if we lived a little closer I would bake you a batch of cookies myself. Thanks Jan