Baking a Cake In Auntie's Kitchen

While my Aunt Rusha and momma chatted
     on the front porch swing that afternoon
     I slipped into Auntie’s kitchen 
     to bake a cake.
How hard could it be, I thought—
     a little of this and a little of that, mostly
     flour, as I recall, and other white stuff
     from her pretty cannisters.
My cake mixed up quite well, but I needed
     some liquid to hold it together, like oil,
     I believe Auntie used, like the oil
     in the squirt can atop the frig.
That should do the trick, but I could barely
     reach it, and the chair I was standing on
     slipped just as I poured in the precious oil
     only to come tumbling down
     on my diaper-clad bottom!
The clatter got their attention.  By the time
     they got to the kitchen
     I was running home as fast as I could
     through the cornfield.
Auntie told the story a hundred times
     and always added, “If he hadn’t used
     the machine oil, I could have baked
     a pretty good cake.”     
       
written June 4, 2021
submitted to "A Tender Moment from Childhood" poetry contest
sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Cheney Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 6:08 AM
A slippery cake caper if ever I read one.
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Yes, indeed, Kenneth. Thanks for the visit.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 5:18 AM
Machine Oil Cake, Machine Oil Cake. Come take a bite, of the cake that I bake! Ha! Love this on so many levels!
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Thanks, Caren. I heard that story a million times when I was growing up!
Laurie Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 5:57 PM
Hello Milton … I think I’d be eating corn off the cob for a week in fear of eating my own cake. Enjoyable story; thanks Milton - Lindsay
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. Just don't use machine oil in anything you cook....just sayin'.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 9:55 AM
So adorable :) Love it. Wishing you a win. God bless you, Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thanks bunches, Gina. It's a true story, just the way Aunt Rusha loved to tell it, while I turned red!
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