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Baking a Cake In Auntie's Kitchen

While my Aunt Rusha and momma chatted on the front porch swing that afternoon I slipped into Auntie’s kitchen to bake a cake. How hard could it be, I thought— a little of this and a little of that, mostly flour, as I recall, and other white stuff from her pretty cannisters. My cake mixed up quite well, but I needed some liquid to hold it together, like oil, I believe Auntie used, like the oil in the squirt can atop the frig. That should do the trick, but I could barely reach it, and the chair I was standing on slipped just as I poured in the precious oil only to come tumbling down on my diaper-clad bottom! The clatter got their attention. By the time they got to the kitchen I was running home as fast as I could through the cornfield. Auntie told the story a hundred times and always added, “If he hadn’t used the machine oil, I could have baked a pretty good cake.” written June 4, 2021 submitted to "A Tender Moment from Childhood" poetry contest sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Date: 6/7/2021 6:08:00 AM
A slippery cake caper if ever I read one.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/8/2021 11:18:00 AM
Yes, indeed, Kenneth. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 6/5/2021 5:18:00 AM
Machine Oil Cake, Machine Oil Cake. Come take a bite, of the cake that I bake! Ha! Love this on so many levels!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/8/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I heard that story a million times when I was growing up!
Date: 6/4/2021 5:57:00 PM
Hello Milton … I think I’d be eating corn off the cob for a week in fear of eating my own cake. Enjoyable story; thanks Milton - Lindsay
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/8/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. Just don't use machine oil in anything you cook....just sayin'.
Date: 6/4/2021 9:55:00 AM
So adorable :) Love it. Wishing you a win. God bless you, Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/4/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thanks bunches, Gina. It's a true story, just the way Aunt Rusha loved to tell it, while I turned red!

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