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baigne de soleil - bathed in sun

(a poem in several Haiku and Senryu stanzas) The molten gold sun on cerulean canvas breeze borne cirrus clouds flawless days stretching like sun-kissed bodies - crisp white linen cabanas lips roughly sore from innumerable kisses we shimmer white hot. Lulling rhythmic waves - heavens extravagant taste - on leisure sculpt days masterpiece pleasures, love’s instigative brushstrokes, paint compelling joy . . songs for this: Our Day Will Come by Amy Winehouse Heat Wave by Linda Ronstadt Viva La Vida by Coldplay . . Haiku poems - 5-7-5 syllable lines - about nature Senryu poems - 5-7-5 syllable lines - about feelings

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/25/2024 11:50:00 AM

Dear Anais, what a breathtaking ode to the beauty of nature and love. I love how each stanza evokes emotions creating serene days under the golden sun. The Haiku and Senryu form adds a delicate rhythm to your words, enhancing the sensory experience for me the reader. This is an exquisite piece that captures the essence of blissful moments in the sun. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Anais Vionet
Date: 5/26/2024 7:54:00 AM

In my heart, I’d like spend every day at the beach - I don’t swim that much but I love the ocean. Maybe I should join the merchant marines - is that still a thing? I’d need an ocean of sunscreen too. Thanks for your wonderful comment Daniel - as always.