Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- Bahamas and Bananas -

In wait for spring, snow is falling
Escape to the idyllic islands of Bahamas

Create your own adventure, the palette is ready
Framed by a gorgeous, mesmerizing blue sea

Eating a banana can lighten your mood
Soft and lovely coral sand, a pink sunset

Get away from the cold and explore new exotic locations
Many hidden gem to discover, just ask Christopher Columbus










02.03.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
(unrhymed couplets)
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Carol Eastman April 7, 2017 at 12:39 PM Dearly would love a vacation! Great write. Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2017 at 12:42 PM - Me too :))) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman March 16, 2017 at 4:36 PM I'm packed and ready to go! Seriously after reading your poem Bahamas and bananas sound marvelous! Enjoyed your imaginative whimsical couplet~hugs~Che :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2017 at 3:25 AM - Welcome on the journey, Cheryl :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie March 10, 2017 at 4:59 PM A fun filled whimsical couplet Anne-Lise-:-) Such a happy feel to your words, one can almost smell the bananna's..lol A delight to read :-) Enjoy a lovely weekend :-) many blessings to you, lynnxx p.s. you could make ANYWHERE sound desirable and dreamy and always with a spiritual element... such is your incredible talent! :-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2017 at 11:55 AM - I'm so tired of snow and rain, Lynn ... spring is welcome :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary March 9, 2017 at 4:21 PM Splendid description... wish I were there! Terry Anne-Lise Andresen March 10, 2017 at 1:25 AM - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Terry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:58 AM Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share... Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 7:00 AM - Funom, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman March 6, 2017 at 5:09 PM Hello Anne-Lise, Your words here have sold me on the Bahamas. (I lived Florida for a year after I retired from the Army in 1996, and was about one-hour's drive from Coca Beach and the Atlantic Ocean. Not the Bahamas, of course, but not so cold as it is here in Europe!!) I would imagine that Christopher Columbus did eat a few bananas when he arrived in the Bahamas. A neat write and theme. I will tell Ingrid. Perhaps we'll make it there one day!! A Giant Seven too!! Cheers, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2017 at 2:10 AM - Florida sounds lovely too ... :) - Many thanks for friendly visits "a giant seven" and comments, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 5, 2017 at 1:15 PM A delightful poem, Anne-Lise, and a great suggestion for people who are still enduring winter weather. I was in the Bahamas last spring and it was just as you described. Lovely! Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 1:18 PM - Sounds delicious, Carolyn :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin March 5, 2017 at 10:02 AM Dear Sunshine and I do mean Sunshine! You are a descriptive genius! Thanks for the round trip ticket! 7, my best, chuck Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 10:09 AM - A pleasure, Chuck :) - Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 4, 2017 at 7:42 PM A very sweet, tropical getaway! Thanks for taking me there...:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 5:58 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux March 4, 2017 at 7:19 AM Sign me up, I too want to go. A most appetizing write. Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2017 at 8:00 AM - Of course Richard, nice that you want to join :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus March 4, 2017 at 7:14 AM I enjoyed this delightful poem, Anne-Lise, especially the image of coral sand and a pink sunset. I wouldn't mind a trip to the Bahamas:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2017 at 7:57 AM - Not saying no thanks, to a little sandbetween the toes Paul :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan March 4, 2017 at 5:08 AM So beautiful Anne...It's summer here.... Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2017 at 7:53 AM - Sounds delicious, Supraja :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower March 4, 2017 at 12:23 AM "Soft and lovely coral sand, a pink sunset" - I like, especially, this line. It feels so refreshing. :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2017 at 4:18 AM - Blue skies and sunshine ... everything is better than snow, Moon Flower :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams March 3, 2017 at 11:02 PM I'm very lucky to be living in sunny Australia, Sunshine, and we do live an idyllic life like this. You've painted a lovely picture with your poem. Well written Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2017 at 4:16 AM - Send me your address .... hope you have a spare room, Maria :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian March 3, 2017 at 4:24 PM Lovely, dear Sunshine. At least we had a sweet moment under the sun thanks to your poem. :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2017 at 4:14 AM - I need sunshine and birdsong, Eileen :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray March 3, 2017 at 4:23 PM I always come to your poems serious then burst out laughing after that split second, when the picture appears. Thank you for the laugh and thoughts of warm adventures tonight Sunshine. Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2017 at 4:10 AM - The image, title and text must fit together - when it give the reader a smile ... then I've done my job :) - (Have you stolen my banana ?:)) - Thanks for nice visit and comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 3, 2017 at 2:34 PM okay, i'm going there for a real treat of a lifetime.. wonderfully penned, anne.. happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 2:58 PM - Only a lovely dream, Nette :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz March 3, 2017 at 11:22 AM I hardly could eat that banana, unfortunately, Annelise. Excellent idea! Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 11:38 AM - You not eat bananas, Mario ? - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 3, 2017 at 6:17 AM Beautiful write Sunshine...a trip to sunny isles Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 11:17 AM - It would have been lovely, Joseph :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams March 3, 2017 at 5:25 AM What a lovely picture you paint. Takes us to wonderful times of Sun and surf. Well written Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 11:16 AM - ... but, sigh ... it are and will be just a dream, Maria :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci March 3, 2017 at 4:31 AM Dear Anne you have the perfect name because you indeed just gave the gift of sunshine. Your title says it all and what a fabulous picture you attached with your entry. Yes, we have to make our own adventure. Thanks for taking us along. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 11:14 AM - Tired of wet and cold days, Lisa :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett March 3, 2017 at 4:23 AM Your wonderful poem has got me into the holiday mood, desperate for some sunshine and relaxation, weather in England absolutely awful, Roy. Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 11:11 AM - If only the spring could come ... I am satisfied, Roy :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 2, 2017 at 11:02 PM Never have travel out of the states, but maybe one of these days Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 2:37 AM - Many adventures to experience, Eve - Take a chance and enjoy :) -Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2017 at 7:05 PM ooh, yes, I have been there once. It was wonderful. Have you gone? Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 2:31 AM - No I never been to the Bahamas, but it sounds delicious Andrea :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet March 2, 2017 at 3:25 PM Your words enter my mind, resonate there and make me think of winter getaways and warm sunny days. Well done. Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2017 at 2:32 AM - I prefer warm sunny days, Emile :) - Thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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