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Baggage Reclaim

Love is a kind of madness and, as such, can sometimes hoist its victims to strange heights. Though love may cause a fever where it bites, this time the troops have quelled the pending putsch. I ask your pardon for our magic nights, those rhymes I wrote you, crackling with emotion: you'll overlook, I hope, my fierce devotion, and my defending you with all my might. I'm sorry. It will not occur again. A broken heart brings wisdom in its wake: I gladly drank the hemlock for your sake: I let your prettiness, your sharp disdain intoxicate me like your smell, your touch. Forgive me, please, for loving you too much.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/21/2017 12:34:00 AM
Those last three lines are painfully beautiful. Congratulations on your placement :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/21/2017 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 2/20/2017 4:04:00 PM
such an intensely sad subject Michael many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/20/2017 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! xxx
Date: 2/20/2017 3:56:00 PM
Michael, I am so glad your sonnet is on the winners list. I think you wrote superbly in the sonnet form and Carolyn is right, this is sensitive and touching from a man's point of view. BIG congrats for your win.
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/20/2017 4:02:00 PM
Such beautiful words, Andrea! I am very grateful to you.
Date: 2/20/2017 3:49:00 PM
How sad it is when we have to apologize for loving someone "too much," Michael. A touching, sensitive poem that deserves its recognition in the contest. Congratulations!
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/20/2017 3:53:00 PM
That's so nice of you to say, Carolyn. Thank you very much!

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