Sneha Rv Poet Footle

Bagful

The Weight of Education 

School bag 
   Backs sag



Heavy heart 

Suitcase 
  Warped face


Outdated 

Old bag 
   Rats nag


The Friendly Postman 

Mailbag 
   Tails wag 


Aviation Crisis 

Handbag
     Wrong tag 


Trends 

Rag bag 
    So swag 



Time Travel 


Pack bag
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                         Jet lag

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Pipping Stars December 24, 2017 at 1:10 PM swag went some where's ... sounds rather youthfulness ... surrounding mind staggering ... pre-formances ... really live the way your words jive . ...

Janice Canerdy December 23, 2017 at 10:23 PM Very creative, Sneha! Janice

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2017 at 8:13 PM Seeing this one again. I just think it's so clever!!

Gregory Richard Barden December 9, 2017 at 4:36 PM Congratulations on your Footle win, Sneha - blessings, friend! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2017 at 7:10 AM - Awesome footle, Sneha :) - Congratulations - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian November 28, 2017 at 3:52 PM I see congrats are in order for this lovely string of footles, dear. My favorite was the aviation crisis. Clever! Thanks for your visit to my poem. Hugs

Silent One November 28, 2017 at 3:38 PM Excellent...

Vijay Pandit November 28, 2017 at 1:21 PM Hi Sneha--your clever poem won--well deserved, congrats!

Joseph May November 28, 2017 at 4:21 AM Congrats on your win

John Lawless November 27, 2017 at 9:21 PM a very nicely bagged string of Footle...

Jan Allison November 27, 2017 at 6:59 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sneha this string of footles was so clever:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2017 at 3:18 PM Congrats on a well deserved win. Clever clever girl.

Barry Stebbings November 27, 2017 at 2:12 PM Congratulations on your win, Sneha. // Barry

Jean Murray November 27, 2017 at 11:30 AM What a wonderful approach to landing a place on the winner's list. Well done Sneha.

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2017 at 10:25 AM Congrats!

Paul Callus November 27, 2017 at 10:11 AM Clever and quite original, Sneha. Do you need a porter?:) ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Jan Allison November 26, 2017 at 5:40 AM You are so creative Sneha !! An awesome string of poems and I love the clever titles! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley November 25, 2017 at 10:13 PM Wow this is awesome and clever Sneha. Your footles are charming, witty and well done. Excellent and enjoyed especially your last one. Best wishes for a win!

Vijay Pandit November 25, 2017 at 9:12 PM Good work Sneha..best for a win!