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Bagful

The Weight of Education 

School bag 
   Backs sag



Heavy heart 

Suitcase 
  Warped face


Outdated 

Old bag 
   Rats nag


The Friendly Postman 

Mailbag 
   Tails wag 


Aviation Crisis 

Handbag
     Wrong tag 


Trends 

Rag bag 
    So swag 



Time Travel 


Pack bag
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                         Jet lag

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Pipping Stars Date: 12/24/2017 1:10:00 PM swag went some where's ... sounds rather youthfulness ... surrounding mind staggering ... pre-formances ... really live the way your words jive . ... Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/23/2017 10:23:00 PM Very creative, Sneha! Janice Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/22/2017 8:13:00 PM Seeing this one again. I just think it's so clever!! Login to Reply

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 12/9/2017 4:36:00 PM Congratulations on your Footle win, Sneha - blessings, friend! :-) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2017 7:10:00 AM - Awesome footle, Sneha :) - Congratulations - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/28/2017 3:52:00 PM I see congrats are in order for this lovely string of footles, dear. My favorite was the aviation crisis. Clever! Thanks for your visit to my poem. Hugs Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 11/28/2017 3:38:00 PM Excellent... Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/28/2017 1:21:00 PM Hi Sneha--your clever poem won--well deserved, congrats! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/28/2017 4:21:00 AM Congrats on your win Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 11/27/2017 9:21:00 PM a very nicely bagged string of Footle... Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2017 6:59:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sneha this string of footles was so clever:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/27/2017 3:18:00 PM Congrats on a well deserved win. Clever clever girl. Login to Reply

Barry Stebbings Date: 11/27/2017 2:12:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Sneha. // Barry Login to Reply

Jean Murray Date: 11/27/2017 11:30:00 AM What a wonderful approach to landing a place on the winner's list. Well done Sneha. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/27/2017 10:25:00 AM Congrats! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2017 10:11:00 AM Clever and quite original, Sneha. Do you need a porter?:) ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2017 5:40:00 AM You are so creative Sneha !! An awesome string of poems and I love the clever titles! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 11/25/2017 10:13:00 PM Wow this is awesome and clever Sneha. Your footles are charming, witty and well done. Excellent and enjoyed especially your last one. Best wishes for a win! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/25/2017 9:12:00 PM Good work Sneha..best for a win! Login to Reply