Bag of Trash

Stumbling on a bag of trash;
Set aside to toss away,
To be burned into gray ash
Or be found another day.

Set aside to toss away,
Like a cold dark memory
Or be found another day;
Recounting a great story.

Like a cold dark memory,
Relics full of history;
Recounting a great story,
Shedding doubt on mystery.

Relics full of history,
A secret to never know;
Shedding doubt on mystery,
An ancestor did bestow. 

A secret to never know;
Shattered love torn in pieces,
An ancestor did bestow;
Now silently releases.

Shattered love torn in pieces,
To be burned into gray ash;
Now silently releases,
Stumbling on a bag of trash.

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Pantoum” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Paula Swanson
Aug. 10, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gorelick Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 3:36 PM
This one is a bit different..congrats to you..well done. BG
Williams Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 11:57 AM
hey caryl, congrats on your win, David
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 4:33 PM
Congrats Caryl on your great win in Pantoum with this wonderful write ..interesting luv..
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 10:57 AM
engrossing, caryl! applause to you for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!
Ramage Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Excellent poem, really touching. lee
Macmillan Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Hi Caryl, WOW, the mystery aspect is jarring, unexpected and leaves me wanting more. Love letter? News? Why? This not knowing really works in this. Sometimes we answer everything, and the reader is left with not a single question. Your piece will linger with me because it tantalizes! Well done. I hope this places very high! Cyndi
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Caryl. Love, Carol
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