Bad Surgery

My
Doctors'
surgery could 
do with some music.
And some decent lighting.
And better looking receptionists.
And possibly a dancing pole in the middle.
Oh and a Buffet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:35 AM
To be honest, Bill, I view doctors' surgeries as dreary places where I would rather not be at all...even if they were to brighten and liven them up:) // paul
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:40 AM
You don't want much Bill - i would settle with actually being able to get an appointment when i want to lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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