Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Bad Morning,Good Morning

I got up late
and felt so tired;
I rued the day
that I'd been hired.

But all was well:
"Day off," I said,
and laughing loud,
returned to bed...

for Sara's 'Morning' contest

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Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2016 at 3:55 PM oh I HAD seen it before. WAs just checking down below. I did not remember seeing it so I think I liked it better the second time around!

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2016 at 3:54 PM hahaha. THis IS AWESOME and I see it won, so big congrats to YOU

Ralph Sergi March 25, 2016 at 7:18 AM Congratulations on your win, Jack.

Vladislav Raven March 23, 2016 at 9:20 PM Hi Jack, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

Carlene Simpson March 23, 2016 at 8:51 PM Sounds much like me too :-)....Congrats Jack

Susan Gentry March 23, 2016 at 3:09 PM Congratulations on your win! Made me smile.

Connie Marcum Wong March 22, 2016 at 9:25 PM Jack, boy you nailed this with just a few well chosen words. Congratulations on your number two placement Jack! Bravo! ; )

Brian Mcclain March 22, 2016 at 5:10 PM Hi Jack, Nice! "I got up late and felt so tired; I rued the day that I'd been hired"--I'm hailing that as an instant classic. Congrats on your well-earned win. Cheers, Brian

Charlie Smith March 22, 2016 at 1:04 PM Congratulation Jack, well done...

Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 12:30 PM Very nice humorous write, Jack. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick March 22, 2016 at 11:51 AM Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Eve Roper March 22, 2016 at 11:43 AM Congratulations on your win!

Joanna Daniel March 22, 2016 at 9:05 AM Nicely done poem with a lot of wit:) Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the morning contest:)

Wilma Neels March 15, 2016 at 6:22 AM Such a witty entry Jack ;) Wishing you the best for the contest my friend.. liefde W

Constance La France March 14, 2016 at 4:40 PM Jack, I love this, just like you to drop in leave a gem and leave again, wonderful 7 and best of luck in the contest.

Paul Callus March 14, 2016 at 3:25 AM Witty and pleasant...something that many can relate to! Pleased to see you back in action, Jack; hope you're keeping well. ~ Regards // paul

Joyce Johnson March 13, 2016 at 8:39 PM Great sense of humor Jack. Thank you for reading and commenting. I am trying to get back in the groove again and have been entering a few of the contests. Love, Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 8:07 PM LOVE it. You are back on board. Sure wish you would stay a while and play. I just adore your wit, Jack

Jan Allison March 13, 2016 at 5:19 PM Lovely contrast here Jack - I love those days when you can turn over and go back to sleep Jack:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx