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Bad Habits

here i sit, having made a bet that i could poem off the shelf; about what(?) anything(?) yes (help myself) just had a cigarette (comes to mind) and in some alloted time (while i be-sotted with menthol) i'll write all; phrase and blurb, noun and verb, penned to please quick as a breeze the question is should my words be understood if there-in be a dis-ease; punctuation(?) versus intonation(?) (a 'seeming' naught to please) however, there is hope within the scope of script of readers feast, hints and clues from which to choose (the most being the least) to be smote by.....another smoke i'll have to run out of words, or, by writing of the absurd for the sake of it, the shake of it, turds got to step out for a minute have a bout with a finite one less to live one left to light

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Date: 12/5/2018 4:33:00 AM
Nice flow here, a fun read, cheers
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:57:00 PM
Very unique indeed, but worthy of a great write! Well done Sand...All the best...Charlie
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Date: 7/24/2018 8:44:00 AM
I like the light tone of this.
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Date: 7/19/2018 6:43:00 PM
A very interesting write.You appear to have a good skill at mastering imagery.I found it enjoyable to share this with you also I detect a sense of humour which appeals to me.Thank you.
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Date: 10/29/2022 3:09:00 PM
....thanks.....and you've an interesting sense of : ) stan

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