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Grammar When it comes to grammar I always break the rules I am from the old school I never adhere to the “do and don’t I am a devious character indeed... oh! guess what! My Dali lama teaching Was never influential because Nothing else matters to me I am who I am Prose and complete And most of the time Politically or grammatical incorrect Whatever, or whoever I am. I am a poetess with a mean ***** switch my main focus is to get my point across Artful and prose; I play the devil’s advocate Guilty as charge, I am in charge of my anthology No outsiders can never curve my pen To construct a well written poem When I am on a roll I never stop to compose Or worry about starting my sentences with “and our but” Even if it makes me clunky; no biggie that me I have no intention of offering a toast or pretend I am your host at your table. I am the artful dodger, I know how to submit and watch As my pen become public enemy number one. (mostly to some) Sorry my master! My mentor, Dali lama (my conscience) ................................................................... May I examine my mind in all actions? And as soon as a negative state occurs, Since it endangers me and others, May I firmly face and avert it. : Quote Dali Lama

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Date: 10/6/2012 12:52:00 PM
Elvis Presley would not sound quite right singing "You aren't anything but a hound dog" Sometimes bad grammar sounds better. Good poem.
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Annie Lander
Date: 10/7/2012 6:17:00 PM
one love Robert Pettit, thank you so much for reading.
Date: 9/27/2012 3:53:00 PM
Art in any form will have it's critics and admirers. One should write what suits them. And be driven by their own inspiration and not bow to convention for the sake of attention. Write what's in your heart.
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Annie Lander
Date: 10/7/2012 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 9/23/2012 11:37:00 AM
Seems ok to me : ) As long as people get the point, what's all the fuss about, That is my view on grammer, love elizabeth
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Annie Lander
Date: 9/24/2012 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Girl Celtic . for comment. nothing is wrong with breaking the Grammar rule something so long as you know the rule about your grammar.. blessed annie
Date: 9/23/2012 8:48:00 AM
It's hard when I have to translate from Norwegian to English .... lol ... It will be as it is, I do my best ... lol ... Have a wonderful Sunday. - Love oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Annie Lander
Date: 9/23/2012 9:43:00 AM
AnneLise Andreson however, the main thing is knowing the rules about grammar.. thank you so much for commenting
Date: 9/23/2012 7:50:00 AM
It’s a beauty on a theme like 'Grammar'. Excellent Poem illustrating your likes and dislikes for bad grammar. In poetry a margin should be given for the feelings to come on unrestrained. Still I agree that rules are rules and it must be followed to give perfection to any creative writing. Thank you for your kind words on my Poem. With best wishes…Ravindra
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Annie Lander
Date: 9/23/2012 9:43:00 AM
thank you Ravindra for reading i am looking forward in reading some more of your poems

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