Bad For Business



Today wasn’t a good morning at all for Hassan,
a victual merchant in Baghdad
Thirty four customers got killed by a suicide bomb
A jihadist Arab wearing an explosive vest,
proclaiming to be fighting against the west,
ended up only murdering his own people
The sun rising on the eastern horizon
cast a bloody pale
Screams and sobs, weeps and wails
Ambulance sirens blaring ... death is a hard item to sell
Innocent people shopping for meat, dairy, nuts and fruit,
in a tragic transaction bought the farm
The sign outside the market said half-off,
it didn’t mean exiting with half a leg or one arm
Somehow, Hassan in dust-covered anger survived
He was one of the fortunate few to make it out alive
with every body part intact, except his calm Iraqi mind;
it keeps expanding and contracting
in violent, kinetic convulsions a million times
from such a vile, humanitarian crime
Anxiety fruit flies hover over unsold crates of apricots,
seething vengeance 
ferments the not bought bottles of apple vinegar
Mass killing is always bad for business — 
a lot of potential repeat customers will only 
come to the open air stalls one time
Nobody wants to buy ripe pomegranates, fresh goat milk
and vintage premature dying
Terrorism is bad for consumerism,
fanatical death wish ain’t good for the merchant gift registry
Not when buying a bouquet of flowers becomes a morgue delivery
Suicidal shrapnel kisses don’t welcome tourism,
foreigners eschew dying on vacation ... death ain’t an easy item to sell
Prayer vigil purchases of screams and sobs, weeps and wails
Hassan says business has been bad
ever since that fatal, holiday dawn mourn
Only rueful disaffection comes 
with the bagging of the cabbage and corn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/18/2017 8:05:00 PM
This is very well written Freddie. I was taken away reading it. Words like anxiety fruit and the very title is so good. I like how you repeat about the screams and sobs, weeps and wails. Great write.
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Date: 9/18/2017 1:49:00 PM
"Suicidal shrapnel kisses don't welcome tourism"... Amen. Fantastic pen Freddie xomo!
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:23:00 AM
Brutal write Freddie, business as usual in to many markets...
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