Bad Decision

In the tall grass the rabbit tried to hide
"I'm so darned clever," he thought with great pride
His thinking was wrong
His ears were too long
"Run rabbit, run!" the laughing fox cried...


For the Rabbit contest..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Eastman Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 8:02 AM
Very clever.
Babcock Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 9:51 AM
This is so cute. We have a resident rabbit on our street and has been here a few years. No foxes but coyotes on the outskirts of the city. love phyl
Goller Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Lucky Rabbit got away. a fun limerick.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
King Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:02 AM
Good limerick. I enjoy the cleverness of it.
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