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Bacon - Yum Yum

Quickly the hikers rest with a freshly built ----------CAMPFIRE One of them flips out his ancient cast iron -------- PAN Soon, fresh smells permeate the woods, something is --------- FRYING Having trekked and snacked on dates and raisins, so ---------- TASTY Smiles now appear as they now sample --------- BACON

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Date: 4/24/2010 6:24:00 AM
Great end-line write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 6:01:00 PM
Dear James, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win In Dane Ann's First Ever " End Line Word " Contest "Bacon - Yum Yum" is the very Essence of this New Form Excellent Message in the body End Words meld well with Thank-YOU for YOUR Support and Participation in Dane and my Efforts to Establish This New Form of POETRY YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on this End-line.... Keep em comin' my friend....:JP}
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:21:00 PM
Hey James, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf. ..Jimmy
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:19:00 AM
Clever work, James. My congratulations on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest. A very tasty poem! :) Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jame. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:27:00 PM
Sounds like a good time. You have me smiling with you. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations James, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:30:00 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem and placement in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a terrific write and a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv..Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:49:00 PM
Delicious! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:30:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry today James. Please continue with your writing and keep sharing it with us. I wish you the best if you entered this in Dane's End Line Word Contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:59:00 PM
I can smell it, good write!!
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Date: 2/28/2010 1:27:00 PM
Would love to be there
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Date: 2/28/2010 1:26:00 PM
Oh, this is good, James! You are good! Thanks for this delightful, tasty End Line Word Poem. Believing it's for the contest, I wish you good luck! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/28/2010 1:09:00 PM
Delicious,I can smell the scent..yummy..Charma
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