Alexis Y. Poet Free verse

Back When I Was a Child

The song that moves and
 touches my heart is dance 
with my father again.
Because I will never forget 
the man my father was.
Back when I was a child 
I longed to be in his 
presence.
He had a larger than life
personality. 
His nieces and nephews
looked at him as a father.
“Oh lord I’m dying to dance 
with my father again”.
Everytime I hear the song I 
begin to cry.
I long for his hug
I long to hear his voice
“Oh lord I’m dying to dance
 with my father
again”
“ Oh lord we’re all dying
 to dance with my father 
again”.

4-4-17
Alexis Y
Inspired by my favorite song
Dance With Father Again
Written by Richard Marx And
Luther Vandross
https://youtu.be/wmDxJrggie8

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Christopher Flaherty July 5, 2018 at 5:55 PM Absolutely Brilliant song by Lither Vandross. 1 of my favorite memories of my Father before he died was cutting his hair and picking him up and taking him to the toilet very sad but 2 grown men dancing seems rather odd . Do not put off till tomorrow what you can do today because tomorrow may be 1 day to late . Cheers loved it very emotional

Line Gauthier October 16, 2017 at 7:44 PM Thanks Alexis, what a heartwarming poem. And thanks also for the link to the Luther Vandross song. That was the full package. Have an awesome week.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 29, 2017 at 2:34 PM A great poem a 7 I enjoyed your poem.

Curtis Johnson April 28, 2017 at 1:13 AM Good song. good write. Thanks for sharing the love and the memories.

John Hamilton April 22, 2017 at 1:32 PM Great song Alexis. Luther was one of the best singers of all time, this was one of his best, also love always and forever. Great sentiments for a father, great poem to give us an idea what your looking for.

Elizabeth Kinch April 20, 2017 at 1:32 AM A beautiful poem and tribute to your father, a fabulous seven dear Alexis.

Maurice Yvonne April 6, 2017 at 10:45 AM Wow, you touched my heart with this write and I confess I cried. A Fav. Lots Of Love, armand.

Freddie Robinson Jr. April 5, 2017 at 1:29 PM Such a beautiful poem, Alexis. I can really relate to this poem because my father and I have such a close bond, which isn't surprising since I'm named after my father. This was a very heartfelt write, and I feel for your loss. A gem of a poem. A triple 7! Love and smiles to you.

Robert Lindley April 5, 2017 at 9:13 AM This exceptional poem hit me deeply my friend. I lost my father when I was fifteen. I know exactly how you feel and how one longs for time with a deceased father. Now as of January 30th, deceased mother has been added to my longings.. A7 and a beautiful fav for me.. Alexis Y. April 15, 2017 at 3:31 PM Hi Robert, My life has not been the same since I lost my father. I miss him every day. I am sorry for the lost of both of your parents my friend- Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis April 5, 2017 at 7:59 AM The yearning of the soul to be with the one who has brought it to life is enormous! A touching poem so well written dear, Alexis! A 7!

Lisa Ricci April 5, 2017 at 5:53 AM Good Morning Alexis. First I see you are the host of this contest. Its a wonderful and inspired thought. You have chosen a beautiful song with such emotion and expression and Luther was amazing. Thank you for the invitation to us all to join in. Your person version is beautiful and touching. Well done entirely.

Ettie Christian-Bowling April 4, 2017 at 9:49 PM Very touching piece of work :) - Love Ettie

Charlie Smith April 4, 2017 at 9:24 PM Fond memories to be sure Alexis...

Tim Smith April 4, 2017 at 5:39 PM This is beautiful and quite fitting for me. On Friday I have a father/daughter dance with my youngest.

Charmaine Chircop April 4, 2017 at 5:00 PM This is so emotive dear Alexis, touched my heart and soul, and love the song too.

Chris Green April 4, 2017 at 4:28 PM Really good and touched my heart Alexis. It's a shame you can't enter your own contest or this would be a winner for sure. You really penned these emotions, the loss, the missing and the love for your father so well. Alexis Y. April 4, 2017 at 4:38 PM Hi Chris, I am moved by your comment. I can't thank you enough for your continued support. My father meant the world to me:-) Alexis