Back To the Seasonal Future

“back to the seasonal future”


i dreamt of waking
to a night where
a pillow fight
did break out out
in the garden bed

a puff of goose
down now
lays on the ground
and sugarplum fairies
dance in my head
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lane Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 2:48 AM
I think I'll comment with a few words more than 'cute.' Not desperate to climb the community ratings ladder, I will say your concept of a goose down garden sounds like a place I should love to visit, or at least dream of... sugarplum fairies included.
Connelly Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Thanks Lin, but I'm dreading snow this year :(
Jones Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 2:31 AM
Cute
Connelly Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Thanks Karen, I think...
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