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On a blushed evening of late autumn, powdered clouds whisper a tune in notes between sweet and classic, while every hoof of our wagon taps quiet... plowing each route along miles, miles ahead. And as darkness peels of fragile rays, we lay on our carriage among souvenirs while our ancestral home awaits. I remember we are nearing our last milestone, and the urban sprawl ‘s relentless noise exiles the hum of dragonflies, of each word straining gentle reveries. Now that twilight years call, our farmland takes us back where youth’s pureness runs along the grasses crisp...crystalline. Again, with traces of affection , dahlias will purl around us in a slow- dance of floral innocence, cradling each other freely... then to play, delight, and rest in the meadows of time's remains. Laura Loo's Any HM Ever Contest Back To Innocence Theme Contest Resubmitted 3/31/2017 Written 8/20/2015

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Date: 4/13/2017 4:26:00 PM
Beautiful descriptive imagery, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:02:00 PM
just stunning Nette! You capture me with your words daily...hugs! congrats and thank you : )-luloo
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Date: 10/8/2015 1:48:00 AM
Awesome write nette! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 10/3/2015 9:46:00 AM
Such amazing imagery painted by words that flow so eloquently taking the reader back to a time of innocence and simple beauty. Congratulations on your fine win, Nette! Sandra
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:48:00 PM
Nette, it's nice to see this one with a new placement. Congrats!!!!! LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 10/1/2015 7:40:00 PM
There is always something in your poems that makes one want to recite them softly. Always exquisite!! Congratulations Nette!
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations nette on your win!
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:13:00 PM
A lovely image it creates, of two people in their twilight years still very much in love. The lines have an almost ethereal quality to them. Flawless. Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 9/5/2015 12:57:00 PM
Nette Onclaud , Congratulations :) On your wonderful Honorable Mention. ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:54:00 AM
Eloquent write nette! Congrats on ur win! A top winner for me!
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:51:00 PM
oh my, this is SO GOOD, Nette. Is it for the innocence contest. It really makes me FEEL that kind of feeling. Outstanding poetry.
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Date: 8/22/2015 2:04:00 PM
Well, this one took me back in time, even as I followed the plodding of the hoofs nd the creaking of the wagon as each mile drew nearer to times end. What a wonderful thought process you have given to us herein the confines of this truly majestic poem of yours.
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Date: 8/21/2015 11:31:00 AM
This is sooo beautiful my very dear friend, Nette! Your pen flows enchantingly so well! Super galing as always! Embracing this precious gem of yours. Thank you so much for sharing! I'm so sorry for coming only now cuz I went out of Bkk for an educ. trip and just came back yesterday. Hope you're always well and no more typhoon in our place. Tcare always! love you lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/21/2015 2:31:00 AM
Simply delightful Nette the imagery is so so beautiful - I am working hard on my imagery - my dream is to write as wonderfully as you one day:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 8/20/2015 7:51:00 PM
What a lovely and well written piece, I love your write it flows eloquently in the heart of the readers. Excellence for this wonderful piece............A.M.
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Date: 8/20/2015 5:55:00 PM
I could not help but be taken through a homecoming of life's moments so chaste and pure in time of old age. Excellent poem!
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