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Back To My Roots

Cracked sidewalk, Running beside overgrown bushes That moan under the weight Of immense unknown blossoms. It leads me to my own home, Where he waits alone Under the stone archway. His hipbone protrudes; I can see it through his shirt, Which I’m sure he’s sprayed With his sweet cologne. I can almost hear his deep groan, Muttered into my ear as I atone For having flown away from our safe zone.

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Date: 5/10/2017 10:12:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win!
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Carissa Marie
Date: 5/11/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/10/2017 10:30:00 AM
Congrats on the contest! Your poems are so lovely
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Carissa Marie
Date: 5/11/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/9/2017 4:36:00 PM
I really enjoyed the way the moments were described. This poem never misses a beat. Well done
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