Back To Live

My smart iPhone drowned, what a dread! No purpose to get out of bed. Can’t do without fidgets With smarty pants digits When my social life just dropped dead! My buddy, from a dire grave fate, I hastened to resuscitate. My beloved device I interred deep in rice - Saved us both from desperate state! It seems one trite banality Of minor technicality. The truth and the matter, We’re addicted to latter - Sweet virtual reality! Though on technology we thrive, For more exciting toys we strive, Let’s put smart phones aside, Out of sight, out of mind - Let’s smarten up and live alive! My smart iPhone drowned, what a thrill! Hands free I go outside and chill. My deflective device - Silent, deep dug in rice. I have been mastering live skill! February 2, 2022
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Alex Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 12:27 AM
"Let’s put smart phones aside, Out of sight, out of mind - Let’s smarten up and live alive!" - Beautiful thought. Congratulations!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 4:56 PM
This is excellent work Margarita. The rice works. My cannon camera got wet and I put it in rice for three months and now it works just fine. You just need to give it time depending. Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Margarita, great poem for the contest theme, your writing is perfection and I really enjoy it ~ Constance
Leffanta Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Best way to celebrate the Year of The Tiger is with rice! Happy New Year! Aloha!
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