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Temperately cooled shade From Cedar trees off the Coast of Lebanon Shielded our state of Nudity. Sincerely we Speculated; as I wonderfully Whispered in her esthetic ears: "Eve my emphatically enlightened, This garden is stimulating Like paradise." As Sweet musical rapture Soothed our souring Souls from melodious Harps of grander, She warmly whispered, "Just let your tantalizingly Soft sizzling fingers Entwined with the Hair curling on the back of My warm neck, While I taste your lips" Splendidly we sipped warned Warbler feathered wine From Macedonia’s vine, as Our bodies tingled With rapture for—the Honey to come… ~~~~~~~***~~~~~~~ Dedicated to LMB and all the Eves in the contest. Mar sin leat! 9th Place Winner Adam in Eden Contest Sponsored by Linda-Marie Bariana 6/15/10 ~~~~~~~***~~~~~~~

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Date: 6/10/2010 10:43:00 AM
Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:34:00 PM
oh, it looks like THIS one got a win then? Way to go. I really like this one!
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Very passionate write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 6/1/2010 1:44:00 PM
Joseph, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:25:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/31/2010 4:50:00 PM
Congrats Joseph on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/31/2010 11:55:00 AM
Nicely done Joseph. Absolutely, stunning. Joe
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Date: 5/31/2010 8:32:00 AM
Wow, I had to read it again.. Absolutely love this piece.. Captivating and erotic ~ rgds Wilma
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Date: 5/31/2010 7:51:00 AM
WOW.. did u put this in my contest? Joseph this is very unique .. dedicate to your EVE of choice and do so as I am closing my contest tonight... thankxxx for your wonderful and many comments so expressive and so uplifting too.. appreciate.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"..is Sheila your lady?
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Date: 5/30/2010 10:21:00 PM
Thankyou!(: youre a great writer as well(: id love it if youd read my new one i wrote(:
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:18:00 PM
Seductive and so well written, you sure nailed this one. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:05:00 PM
I love this, your word choice is just superb, lots of great alliteration, and it's one hell of a steamy write without being crass. Very well written.
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Date: 5/30/2010 9:02:00 AM
Exotic-erotic is the form here. You absolutely capture the sense of foreign soils and oils. Very warm and wonderful write. Love, daver
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Date: 5/30/2010 7:37:00 AM
ok not having passion without cool drink out of still lol omg joe you got those juices flowing for this one outstanding write here loved the imagery I want mango next time lol with umbrella thanks again my friend for your kind comments
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Date: 5/30/2010 1:13:00 AM
Wowowowo that makes my skin tingle ..to me that is the wait before whats gonna happen between them really enjoyed !!! sarah x
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:55:00 PM
Well penned expressions of stimulation. enjoyed
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:09:00 PM
Well, that does it, Joseph. I have to add you to my list of favorite poets. This is an amazing account of the sensual side of "Eden." Yet another gem from you. So glad you're posting again. Brilliant! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:51:00 PM
excelent write, truely enjoyed, hope you have a nice memorial weekend . P.D.
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:39:00 PM
Joseph my friend this poem is amazing as in WOW- So subtle while at the same time being so tantalizing - Outstanding poetry Joseph - I took my last final Thursday and got a 94 on it, which ended a perfect school year. Thank you for all of your encouragement and support not to mention your priceless friendship, YF4L, God Bless you Joseph, mj
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