Back Then

I try not to be 
that boring elder, speaking 
only of ”back then”
until there is a rolling of the eyes
and whispers
“There she goes again.”

With so few left
to share the memories
of those dear folks of slight renown,
they will be lost to 
time and mystery
unless I write them down.

I regret the unasked questions
of the one grandma left alive
for me to love and know.
I could have listened to her stories
and retold to my children
tales of the long ago.

Names written in
the family Bible 
are all we know of some
of these long gone ancestors.
What traits of his came down to me?
My double jointed thumb?

So this is why my poems
and narratives
are  mostly written of the past.
I am trying to preserve 
family history and
make memories that last.

4/26/11

For Paula's contest "When"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/28/2011 8:49:00 PM
i love hearing old stories.this was nicely written cory
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:28:00 PM
A lovely, wistful write. We often realize, too late, that there are so many questions we could , and should, have asked. Now, both my parents are gone, along with all my aunts and uncles! So many unasked questions are gone with them.
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Date: 4/27/2011 1:53:00 PM
Tracing our ancestry should begin when we are young, but we are more inclined to think about the future than the past then. I listened to all my grandma's tales, but she spoke broken Polish/English, so I learned little from them. I think you meant "trying" in the third from last line. Best one I've seen for Paula's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful Joyce. I love seeing things through your words...Love, Shani
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Date: 4/26/2011 2:16:00 PM
A beautiful write, Joyce. As a child, I used to love the stories of the 'good old days' that my gran told me. I wish she had written them for me too.
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:27:00 AM
Joyce this was right up my alley. as you know i also write a lot of the past. This was a very wam piece your wrote. you is going to tell them about the past if we that lived it don't tell them.
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:14:00 AM
memories are wonderful things.. this was very well written.cory
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