Back Seat Drivers

Movie seen 
Driving home
Newly found couple 
To be alone
 
River bank parked
Dead of night
His golden blond
Beautiful sight
 
Their lips meet
Hands wander
Imagination flow
Hearts ponder
 
To be comfortable 
Seats are changed
Buttons loose
Clothes rearranged
 
Passion starts
Hands walk free
Skin explored
Of he and she
 
Naked souls 
Join as one
Heavens merge
Joys begun
 
With her thrusting hips
In vice like grip
Her loving want
In her he slips
 
In passion applause
His lava flows
Her warm insides
Outer body glows
 
Sweet sweetened mix
Perfumed skin
Warm with-drawl
Potions swim
 
Kisses in clench
Tenderness
This loving two
Soft caress
 
Sexed and fed
They head of home
Wondering about
Their next love roam

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/6/2009 11:20:00 AM
I was wondering what you would have to say about a backseat driver. It wasn't at all what I had expected. Nice surprise. Sara
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Date: 7/5/2009 1:50:00 PM
When I read the title I was thinking of something different. James, you the man!
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Date: 7/1/2009 11:26:00 AM
lovely poem... so true indeed too
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Date: 6/26/2009 3:58:00 PM
Lovely rhyming so smooth and rhythmic.
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Date: 6/26/2009 3:02:00 PM
You give new meaning to the term "backseat drivers," James! Very passionate descriptions -- quite erotic! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/26/2009 2:49:00 PM
Our passion is a primal gift for which we carry all our energy ... and you have nuanced this poem expertly to reflect that truth.
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