back off !

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back off ! snail tells her suitor to slow down

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/29/2025 7:16:00 PM

Pretty funny there, Line. Not to mention clever. ~ Molasses in January

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/28/2025 11:14:00 PM

How cute! I wonder why? He looks kind of cute. ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2025 3:13:00 AM

Can't rush a good thing ~

Bill Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 5:44:00 PM

How funny! thanks for the smiles, Line. I just posted a Haiku about snails, 6/20/2025. This is a great one, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2025 3:13:00 AM

Thanks, Bill. I will check yours out ~