Baby Shoes

So cold…black cold…old cold, wind burns through the cars broken window as it speeds down the black ribbon into the onyx night. Tears of cold seep from the corners of my auburn lashes. The whoop, whoop, of passing phone poles and the engines whirrrrr force my lids to close lazily. Street lights lemon blast them open once too often and I whimper; squirming to get at my thumb, mittens leave me unrewarded. So cold..my cheeks burn cold. So cold…my nose runs clear. Mother turns backward toward me, purple in the dash lights flame wiping my face with her frozen fingers; plumping the blankets and tying my wool cap. Father sings Sinatra songs and clucks me under the chin at a stop. “Baby needs a new pair of shoes!” He says. Gambling that the flight from farmland to M’Yorka would get all of us just that! The prodigal son returns home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Everyone see I did not label it FREE VERSE>
Devonshire Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 10:59 AM
This is a delightful account of your childhood and the influence your parents had on your life, Deborah. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:10 AM
wonderful poem, congrats on your win
Sweetheart Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Congrats Debbie on your 3rd place win in Catie's Baby Boo's contest... a terrific piece of writing TEACH.. now enjoy a terrific time celebrating your victory ..luv.. caio.. pupil..luv..
Richards Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Oh wow...(I would have put this #1....the memories just ring so true (purple dash lights even...I feel as if I'm that child re-living this frigid memory!)....wonderful stuff~~ ! Has to be reality stirred up into poetry!
Heck Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest! Peace always, John
Brown Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Congrats on your win in Catie's contest Deb. Love, Carol
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April 11, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Soooo good luved it.Thanks for your kind comment.Hey I don't know where okie dokie came from but it's kewl.Teresa
Dvorkis Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 7:33 AM
I like your onomatopeia (now way in hell I spelled that right) with the whoop whoop and whirrrr imagery. Very easy to picture myself strapped in the car seat. I admit the last line throws me off a bit but if it's a reference of some sort I can try and look it up. I can tell the father needs money because of the broken car window.
L Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 5:11 AM
A very clear picture of Winter, it is a though i had experience this myself. oh it can bbitterly cold in the winter. i think it kids find that time a lot of fun, despite the cold breeze. very imaginative, it reads real. Abe
Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 3:33 PM
Thanks for sharing this poem..Mr. Frank Sinatra happen to be a man I told my favorite Aunt I would Marry..thanks for the memories.-Still listen to him I love his voice.....Love The Keeper
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Many beautiful images, Deborah. You certainly create the sense of cold very well. Like the thought of your mother bundling you up and your father singing Sinatra songs. (Mine did that too.) I can also appreciate the gambling phrase "Baby needs a new pair of shoes! You evoked some nice memories of simpler days in childhood. Thanks for sharing, Carolyn
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