Baby Platy

In the tank are eighteen fish,
Or maybe there are twenty.
It’s hard to count them, but to me,
It seems that there are plenty.

The tank is not too spacious
But with pebbles and live plants,
The black and orange platys 
Do their slo-mo floaty dance.

Yet I was shown a baby
Hiding underneath the leaves
And there might be another one,
Or so my son believes.

It’s cool to see how creatures
Have their instincts kicking in,
Doing what they can to stay away
From hungry next-of-kin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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December 13, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Fish are so interesting and so calming to watch! Enjoyed this poem Ilene….Debx
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December 13, 2024 at 11:53 AM
I always find them therapeutic and relaxing. Tom
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