Baby, I

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Ok I finally got the audio uploaded woohoo! I had to trim the first couple minutes to make it fit. Entered into Tom Woody's Audio contest
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Baby, I


When your heart is broken in two
When your sad and alone
When the hurt feels brand new
You can't stitch up a stone
Baby,I….feel you.

When you look at your reflection
Nothing seems alright
When your so full of rejection
Your skins feels too damn tight
Baby,I…see you

When you scream silently
No one's worth your trust
When you swear it can't be done
You will never love
Baby, I …hear you

Refrain
Baby I... baby I.... baby, baby I... baby, I love you. 

Bridge:
I may not make it okay
I can't take it all away
But I'll always be your friend
When you don't know who
Will be there for you
Baby,I Am.

After everything explodes
And you look around
When all the violence and noise 
Make no more sound
You wonder who will be there still
Baby, I ..will

You imagine they all
Say your crazy
You think you might be
 Oh, Maybe
You think  they all Say things untrue
Things that hurt to the bone
Baby, I …won't

When you think your alone
That no one cares
No message on your phone
 nothing you want to share
 you wonder who really loves you
Baby, I do.

Refrain
Baby I... baby I.... baby, baby I... baby, I love you.

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Date: 9/7/2025 12:17:00 PM
excellent production. sounds professional. do seven more, "cut an album" and start a career in music.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/8/2025 1:51:00 PM
Heehee wouldn't that be amazing if it were that easy! Nah...I know my limitations... I'm not much of a performer. I'm more of a song writer than a musician but I do appreciate the compliment! Xo
Date: 6/27/2025 2:09:00 AM
Beautiful singing, nice lyrics too dear crystol! Can hear alot of emotions in your vocals! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2025 8:15:00 AM
That's very kind, thank you! Xo
Date: 6/20/2025 10:07:00 PM
reminded me of the last time we was treated to live entertainment at a local café ~ loved it
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2025 8:15:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 6/19/2025 6:24:00 AM
Oh! It is a treat to hear you sing dear poet. Amazing talent. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Cheers!!!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/19/2025 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much! It's not great but I do enjoy playing and singing. Xo
Date: 6/18/2025 4:51:00 PM
Back to say a big congrats!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/19/2025 8:04:00 AM
Ty Karen! Xo
Date: 6/18/2025 3:53:00 PM
Hey, your Baby made it in the top ten. Well done Crys. Keep strumming that uke
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/19/2025 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Tom, I'm honored and grateful! Xo
Date: 9/7/2024 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured today on the PS homepage. It is beautifully written, tender and reassuring. I enjoyed reading it very much.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/7/2024 10:54:00 AM
Oh well thank you Chula! I feel honored for sure! Appreciate your time, to read and comment! Xo
Date: 9/6/2024 10:31:00 PM
Wonderful your playing and singing!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/7/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Karen! This is a fav of mine written for my daughter:)xo
Date: 6/14/2024 4:41:00 AM
You rock Crystol! Very brave. Is that you playing guitar?
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/14/2024 10:26:00 AM
Lol thanks! Ukulele actually... I've been teaching myself to play since all the quarantines with Covid. Had all that time, thought I'd do something I always wanted to do.
Date: 5/6/2024 8:36:00 PM
That's a moving song to your daughter Chrystol. I really like your lyric poems. I wish I knew about music, so I could write lyrics. I know how to play one instrument - the record player.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/8/2024 5:19:00 AM
I appreciate that! It's my go to when I write because I hear most of my writing musically. I play ukulele but not proficiently. Thank you for taking the time to comment!
Date: 4/10/2024 10:06:00 AM
Dear Crystal, your heartfelt song for your daughter is a beacon of love and understanding. Through each verse, you offer comfort and reassurance, acknowledging her pain and standing by her side. I love how your words are filled with empathy and strength, reminding her she is never alone. You may not have all the answers as a mother, but your unwavering support and unconditional love shine through. Your daughter is blessed to have you as her guiding light, offering solace in the darkest of times. - Blessings, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/10/2024 12:10:00 PM
Best encouragement ever... thank you truly Daniel! It warms my heart and tickles my pride a little. Blessings RBAY,Crystol
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