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I wrote this for my teenage daughter and made it into a song.
Baby, I When your heart is broken in two When your sad and alone When the hurt feels brand new You can't stitch up a stone Baby,I….feel you. When you look at your reflection Nothing seems alright When your so full of rejection Your skins feels too damn tight Baby,I…see you When you scream silently No one's worth your trust When you swear it can't be done You will never love Baby, I …hear you I may not make it okay I can't take it all away But I'll always be your friend When you don't know who Will be there for you Baby,I Am. After everything explodes And you look around When all the violence and noise Make no more sound You wonder who will be there still Baby, I ..will You imagine they all Say your crazy You think you might be just Maybe You think they all Say things untrue Things that hurt to the bone Baby, I …won't When you think your alone That no one cares No message on your phone nothing you want to share you wonder who really loves you Baby, I do.

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Date: 4/10/2024 10:06:00 AM
Dear Crystal, your heartfelt song for your daughter is a beacon of love and understanding. Through each verse, you offer comfort and reassurance, acknowledging her pain and standing by her side. I love how your words are filled with empathy and strength, reminding her she is never alone. You may not have all the answers as a mother, but your unwavering support and unconditional love shine through. Your daughter is blessed to have you as her guiding light, offering solace in the darkest of times. - Blessings, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/10/2024 12:10:00 PM
Best encouragement ever... thank you truly Daniel! It warms my heart and tickles my pride a little. Blessings RBAY,Crystol

Book: Shattered Sighs