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upon a cold hill only one word is written _ why whispers in trees ____________________ June 4, 2013 Poetry/Haiku/baby Copyright Protected, ID 06-4832-47-04 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Why? sponsor, Barbara Gorlick, Judged 06/05/2013 Second Place

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Date: 6/6/2013 8:38:00 PM
Constance, a nice little win.... congratulations! *Linda
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:05:00 PM
A heartfelt and powerful write! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your brilliant win... great creativity rewarded.... Jake
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Date: 6/6/2013 11:23:00 AM
Oh, my! What an impact verse. Congratulations! RAY
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:27:00 PM
WOW, constance, and BIG congratulations.
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Date: 6/5/2013 6:51:00 PM
Constance congratulations on your tremendous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:17:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place in my contest. I think this absolutely lovely. I am so happy to see you posting again. BG
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Date: 6/4/2013 6:55:00 PM
This has a sense of trembling.....I love it for the emotion and depth of sadness....but so painful to feel :)
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:50:00 PM
This write says so much in just a few lines, you have masterfully written a creative and awe inspiring poem right here my friend! You have brought to me a tender sigh with this piece's incredible poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/4/2013 11:51:00 AM
Constance, sad... I hope you do good in the contest... xox~ Linda
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