Babies Dream

As i lay here in my waterbed
Many thoughts enter my head
Wish my mum hadnt garlic for tea
Making me cry and raise my knee

I hope my life will be full of fun
Laughter and tears for me her son
With parents who'll guide me to do whats right
Not blindfold me , teaching me to  be trite

Teach me right from wrong, manners do pay
A hug and a kiss will go a long way
Want to grow up Noble and proud
Pride in oneself and in my world

Meanwhile i wait, waiting for the time
When after a long journey will meet, mother of mine
Hope she will love me! my eyes only for her
My smile of satisfaction! my waiting is over

Am all warm again as i lay in the bed
Wrapped up tightly with a tum for my head
Dreaming of life as I am sure it will be
Full of wonder and  knowledge, for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/16/2012 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Seren. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2012 12:14:00 PM
Many congrats Seren on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/15/2012 9:14:00 AM
creative write...Congratulations on your Win friend Seren..Cheers!!
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:39:00 PM
SEREN, , congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:38:00 PM
Seren, ....your poem is awesome :-) good luck...Thank you for sharing*Always~PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/14/2012 2:14:00 PM
Didnt we do well, haha congrats P.D.
Date: 10/1/2012 6:08:00 AM
Cute - small dreams Seren. - Beautiful poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2012 2:14:00 PM
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