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Babes In Pie Land

Bake it with love and watch them run for taste Affable little rug rats that love to eat in haste Babes with eager faces plump & pillow faced Earing out their smiles with a beg of after taste Silently they make a move every noise erased I try and hide the pies for the night of Christmas eve Niggling up the crumbs, I stash away then leave Pitter patter pitter patter to the kitchen they both go Identical on facial grins like two geniuses at stow Each one pokes and prods the soft Pillsbury dough Licking up the berries with a silly grin in toe; Another year of crumpled pies it comes to no surprise Natalicious feigns are coming from their droopy eyes Dotted cheeks of jam with telltale signs of eaten pies. November 15, 2018

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Date: 12/17/2018 4:36:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Pixie Dust. Janice
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:12:00 PM
Pixie Dust, congratulations on your top win! A very delightful acrostic :) ~Mark
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Date: 12/16/2018 9:35:00 PM
Bravo, Pixie. Your acrostic is well deserving of a top win.
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Date: 12/16/2018 4:38:00 PM
Delicious poem! Congrats, Pixie, on first place!
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Date: 12/16/2018 4:17:00 PM
Hi Pixie Dust - this was the first entry and I loved it from the start, practically perfect in every way (got Mary Poppins on the brain!) Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 11/16/2018 8:18:00 AM
Such a cute poem pixie dust and you are clever doing end rhyme with this acrostic:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2018 7:30:00 AM
This was really cute Pixie Dust and so well written. Very nicely done.
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Date: 11/16/2018 6:22:00 AM
You make those pies so delicious..they can't resist. Feigning innocence doesn't work..when evidence is on the face. A unique read, Pixie.
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