Babe

Babe
                partner
             sweet lover
            my  chocolate
      my ice cream and cake
            my strawberry
               my honey
                hot pie
                  wife




By: Leila Mijares


For: Joann Grisetti's
"Ninette Free Poetry Contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

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Dey Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:58 PM
What a truly wonderful write, so fresh with meticulous metaphors beautifully oven. Love this.
Graham Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 1:31 AM
How sweet, I love the metaphors and the format. Nice poem.
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 12:05 AM
A great ninette. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Lvoe, Joyce
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