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Coloured and in cascades, there's foam on the falls, Elliptical dome shaped..almost perfect circles are recalled Haven of childhood and sanctuary gained, ephemeral beauty its existance proclaims, against backdrops on dewdrops in rain on the leaves, bubbles are forming in torrents and streams in my bathtub they a'wait me..under billows of steam..! Copyright Joe Maverick 2011

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Nathan D.

Date: 11/13/2015 10:54:00 AM

read it

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/8/2012 2:15:00 AM

Alliterative delight....had to revisit this bubbly fun write that displays your dreamy vocab and splashes of childhood memories...my mom used to make my sister and I take baths together when we were in preschool and we would tell obnoxious jokes and pretend we were santa claus with rascally soap beards! Yes, the Dungeon of Hell is a true story about me...forgiveness is bliss tho' and our slates were all wiped clean yrs ago...thanks for inquiring, Joe. Blessings to u. gwendolen

Daver Austin

Date: 7/13/2012 11:33:00 AM

Good one, Joe. I always love images through the eyes of children. With kids, sky's the limit. Love, daver

Daver Austin

Date: 5/2/2012 2:14:00 PM

Kind of a bubbly daydream, taking in the gigantic to the simply domestic. This is just my impression, Joe. Could be two kids in a bathtub having a water fight. Forgive me. I like this one mucho - makes ya think. Love, daver

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/17/2012 2:51:00 PM

How I'd love to sink in the steam mid all those bubbles! Sounds like a vacation Joe.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/22/2012 10:28:00 AM

Don't know anybody that don't like BUBBLES. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB

James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2011 9:27:00 AM

Nothing like a hot soothing bath Joe, will skin softening bubbles, nice one :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2011 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Joe. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/23/2011 4:57:00 PM

Now this is some kind of bath, Joe! Wow! Loving the relaxing words you chose. Billows of steam...I may just fall asleeeeeeep!! Gwendolen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/21/2011 9:10:00 PM

Got a kick out of this one Joe. A whole lot of blather about bubbles.. kinda made me want to jump in the tub! Thanks for your comment

David Williams

Date: 9/19/2011 7:55:00 AM

Joe well done this is a good take on bubbles, thanks for your comments on stage mice..David

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/17/2011 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful write, Joe..."babbling 'bout bubbles" is good for the souls of all--the kid is us and adults too. Best wishes for a great weekend..God bless.. Love, Annalise

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/17/2011 3:06:00 PM

Sweet poetry here. Bubbles are one of nature's gifts to us as you show here. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/17/2011 9:03:00 AM

Great verse Joe, Makes me want to drownw in those bubbles. Floats so beautifully!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2011 8:35:00 PM

An interesting write on various places for bubbles, Joe! I like a bathtub with billows of streams. It sounds so cool! Nicely done with so many details! LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2011 6:44:00 PM

The bubbles can be found on fals, streams, even in bathtubs, Joe. It amazes me how they do all seem perfectly circular. Even far offshore, bubbles can be seen on the sea. This is a delightful poem, my friend. I especially like the line about "haven of childhood" as I was enthralled by bubbles when I was young. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 2:25:00 AM

feeling the cool, bubbly mood, joe... a refreshing write with winning wishes..;) huggg, nette

Don Johnson

Date: 9/11/2011 9:25:00 PM

mind a drifting ...by the sounds...imagination sure abounds...if i stop me brain to listen... good one Joe!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2011 7:50:00 PM

Great idea for the contest..Reads like a winning material..Good luck..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2011 11:34:00 PM

HI! Joe, how are you? it's very nice to have you as a friend always~~ I've been having a the worse case of internet service... i don't think SPRINT was such a wise choice...lol.... anyways here i am with my good service... and enjoying your poem without being kicked out. love the bubbles in your poem. kind of creepy in my tub though. I can see how one can battle bubbles always... love the cascade that forms the image in your poem... thank you for sharing,..p.d.