B. C.

A period set Ensconced without rampant strife Days near death end life..........

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Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 9/22/2009 12:01:00 PM

so mysterious...no rampant strife before the birth of Christ? That can't be right, I'm sure you had another meaning...third line is very beautiful though although again, very mysterious. p.s. thanks for the revision suggestion, 'bare' was the word I was going for. oh and no, I've never experienced bliss, not even close. I guess you can say I've felt happy every now and then. For me, and I'm guessing you, real bliss is something else entirely, a happiness few people can attain in one lifetime.L&L

John Freeman

Date: 9/21/2009 7:56:00 PM

Tu tienes mucho talento, Amigote! Do comentaro, Que Sera! Sera! Dios te bendiga, Sinceramente, El Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2009 10:47:00 AM

Interesting senryu, Deborah. Food for thought. Best Wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2009 5:39:00 AM

Interesting. Keep writing. Sara