B9

my head feels like lead soft dark heavy and toxic~ time to draw it out

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/9/2023 5:05:00 PM

Maureen this is brilliant from the title to the end!!! I have always loved your poetry, but please send me some drawings from the other end of your pen. Hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/14/2023 5:56:00 AM

Thank you my friend ~xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/8/2023 7:43:00 PM

Let it out on paper, that's my therapy~

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2023 5:36:00 AM

That’s the plan! My brain no working, can’t focus to draw, so going back to art school :))) bonus exposure therapy for the agoraphobia. xomo!

Lin Lane

Date: 9/8/2023 6:48:00 AM

Erasable poetry. Now there's a worthy thought, Mo! Erase them for better words, blur them to be a titch more ambiguous, or trace over them with ink if they work!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/8/2023 8:29:00 AM

Love that! You get my feels, my soft pencil feels. Hugs! xomo

Chris Con

Date: 9/8/2023 2:53:00 AM

Reading between the lines.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/8/2023 6:07:00 AM

The softer the pencil, the more blurred the lines…