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B.Y.O.C (Bring Your Own Crackers)

You know the story of the Tortoise and the Hare But I'll bet you didn't know that I was there I was mighty hungry and looking for some dinner I decided right there I was gonna eat the winner That rabbit looked tasty I have to admit But that turtle was resilient he just wouldn't quit When the race was over I snuck away from the group Now you're invited to a dinner, we're having turtle soup

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/22/2010 5:39:00 AM
congratulations Larry on this funny very imaginative poem. Made me laugh and I do love to laugh. Thanks
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:39:00 PM
Congrats on the big win, Larry
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:19:00 PM
this is GREAT! congratulations, Larry!
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Date: 8/9/2010 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Turtle Soup". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:48:00 PM
I only have saltines. May I bring them too? Congrats on your win from a Mutant Ninja Turtle mom :) 3rd place...
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:42:00 PM
Ill be there for dinner. Congrats Larry..konce again your the funny man. BG
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:35:00 AM
fantastic, congrats on your win
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:38:00 AM
congrats on your well deserved win!!
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:49:00 AM
Congrats Larry on another first place win in P.D.'s turtle contest with this wonderful write and super win.. u always entertain the poets.. with your charming pieces.. enjoy a happy Sunday.. with luv..
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:04:00 AM
Poor poor turtles!! But enjoyed this write of yours, Larry-- Souper congrats on your 1st place win! -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:17:00 AM
It's like a cartoon version "The Silence of the Limbs" you had me chuckling with this one Larry. Many congrats to you >> James
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations!! Larry once again, enjoyed the way the turtle lost in this one,..p.d.
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Date: 8/4/2010 1:26:00 PM
Awesome, Larry. good luck. Ralph
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Date: 8/4/2010 12:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Larry. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:20:00 PM
Ha ha.....I sort of went for the old "tortoise and the hare story too..........but I like yours better!!!! Great job, Larry!! :)
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Date: 8/3/2010 2:08:00 PM
OOHH RAH! Great one, Larry!
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