B-R-E-A-T-H - of - L-O-V-E

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Inspired by I Corinthians 13:1-3 and Love itself.. :)!

B-R-E-A-T-H - OF - L-O-V-E Summer sun or winter freeze pulls heartstrings in trapeze. . . Cotton soft to gnarled callus vows have thread along my way embroidering ribbon actions to pliant swings of reactions like a darting fish thrilled to catch a passer-by knees. Two pairs of eye sew webs to bridge affection display, pines teeming green crown my arrested heart-- tachycardic I am... each time I hear your sound. Has breath of love tickled my nerves to interaction? Like a bee I'm drawn to your sweet ambiance 'round hoping by miracle it will birth me a fresh start. Scents that streams from bulbs swirl on wafting wind-- Ah! They all fell to shame for your breath of love tames. Once a rebel soul that long been thriving for satisfaction with breath of love that resuscitates, I mend my flame channeling muse to stroke the peak density of mind. Slender February breeze taunt my fingers to type rhymes that shy edge of reason. Eternally plunge in surrender I-- filled with breath of love ships my horizons to script stories in shades that lingers. . . ______________________________________________ ***Sponsor Shadow Hamilton Contest Name your Favourite Old Poem ++Placed 3rd++ ©O.E. Guilermo 12:31 pm, February 07, 2015

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Date: 6/10/2015 4:11:00 PM
A hello Olive, and congrats on your win with this glowing write full of creations beauty..'
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:10:00 AM
thank you so much Joe... =') am glad you like it!
Date: 6/10/2015 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Olive_eloi. I loved this poem the first time I read it, and it's still very fresh in my mind. Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:08:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much! this one of my personal faves in my poems.. =')
Date: 6/9/2015 11:45:00 AM
Olive. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:06:00 AM
thank you so much Skat.. :)!
Date: 6/9/2015 8:26:00 AM
Great poem , closing stanza is brilliant and strikes me especially. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:05:00 AM
Robert, thank you so much for your booster comment!~Olive Eloisa
Date: 6/9/2015 5:03:00 AM
so beautiful and romantic Olive many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:03:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. :)!
Date: 6/8/2015 10:10:00 PM
awesome loving write that you should be proud of Olive! Well done and congrats to you
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:50:00 AM
thank you so much MArk.. :D!
Date: 6/8/2015 9:08:00 PM
A lovely romantic write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/9/2015 6:46:00 AM
Thano you so much Kim.. =')
Date: 6/8/2015 5:27:00 PM
lovely poem Olive congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Date: 6/9/2015 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Shadow.. =')
Date: 2/17/2015 6:15:00 PM
Breath of Love. Beautifully written. Your Heart is filled with Love,
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you DAvid.. :) God has filed me with love.. :)
Date: 2/16/2015 7:31:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read one of yours, Olive. You coax words out somewhere deep and far and spin them into a captivating tapestry of nice feel and flow. You are so blessed and such a blessing! Warm hugs and smiles from our land of thousand isles...:D Kim
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Date: 2/17/2015 2:02:00 AM
thanks much Kim..love indeed inspires us much to write so many things about it... :)
Date: 2/13/2015 7:52:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, I enjoy reading today dear Olive ! - I wish you a romantic Valentine's Day, and a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2015 2:00:00 AM
thanks so much Anne Lise... :) I appreciate you dropping by reading my poem... :) been out awhile... :) hope to be back to write again.. :)
Date: 2/8/2015 4:34:00 AM
Wow you take my breath away with this gem..
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:35:00 PM
thanks much Harry for dropping by.. :) God bless you.. :)
Date: 2/7/2015 6:42:00 PM
Soft and romantic words with beautiful imagery, Olive, and the last stanza is incredible! I know Gail is going to love this...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Rhonda...:) i was just inspired with the theme.. :) hugs too..
Date: 2/7/2015 2:00:00 PM
The wonderful thing about the Soup is the enhancement of Poets whose English is second to them. Be Filipino, Swedish, Argentinian, etc, I can't write in their language, but they in mine. To feel inferior is justified. This en-captures me more to invest my thoughts and comments relating to whom's work. The last line is a WOW, and I'm lost for words describing this poem of yours, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/9/2015 7:33:00 AM
I really thank the sponsors for inspiring me to think and learn more.. :)! and most of all i thank your for the readers, commentors and critics.. :)!
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Date: 2/9/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thanks much James.. :) Indeed, poetrysoup for me is a good learning ground: poetry wise, poetical devices, types.. my vocabulary improve also: deep and it widen.. :)
Date: 2/7/2015 9:42:00 AM
What a lovely and expressive breath of love you set free through your beautifully crafted words, Olive_eloi! Rebel souls are tamed once the light shines to point out the right path to follow. New love will refresh the soul. hugs // paul
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:37:00 PM
It does Paul.. it truly does..only love can bring out such...weeee thanks much.. hugs too..
Date: 2/7/2015 8:27:00 AM
Very expressive work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:35:00 PM
Thanks much Sara.. I appreciate your comments as always.. :)!
Date: 2/7/2015 6:26:00 AM
This is just so beautifully written Olive! Hugs, Deb
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Date: 2/8/2015 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Deb.. :) I appreciate you stopping by.. :D
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Date: 2/8/2015 6:58:00 AM
hugs too.. :)
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