Azure

The snow capped mountain Seems to rise up out of the azure lake That is surrounded by a multitude Unnumerable wildflowers of all hues As I look at my reflection in the azure Waters of the this beautiful lake I see myself for who is reflected there As God looks into my heart, he sees truth

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2009 7:55:00 PM

Flowing words, Sara, and your poetry comes alive when I read it... more please.. I so enjoy ... thankxxx for your comments on my Quest poem... it was written long ago but some of the same questions still plague my mind... I guess thats what keeps us going forward in life... wonderful free verse... Linda-Marie

James Fraser

Date: 11/3/2009 1:15:00 PM

Beautiful word Azure, and it looks at home in this lovely poem Sara >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/2/2009 2:33:00 PM

whoa, scary thoughts, have a good day.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2009 4:36:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry this splendid morning Sara. May you have a beautiful week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 11/2/2009 12:44:00 AM

Lovely poetry Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/1/2009 6:28:00 PM

beautiful poem mom, good one

Jo Bien

Date: 11/1/2009 4:07:00 PM

soupmail Sara JB

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2009 2:29:00 PM

Just today a fellow Soup member and I were speaking of how your well-penned work has grown and now I read this amazing verse. You are gifted, Sara, truly blessed with talent. And I do believe God sees the truth when he looks into our hearts. Fantastic! Love, Carolyn