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Awestruck By Pulchritude

Your soul I can see through your eyes. My soul purified and at peace when I stare into your eyes. I realize the pulchritude of your being. Fresh like green pastures. Your the lily in a valley where beauty is near. An open air where zest is near you are there. So well put together like a bouquet of lily white roses. So pure, so stunning you are. You seem to have fallen out of a cloud, Your presents is loud. Cloud departs when she walks into the room, as angels sweep up rose peddles behind her. Oh such a grace full walk she has, such a golden word she speaks, Oh what a virgin smile. Her heels click on every tile, as she seems to be walking down a glittered isle. Her stare keeps me afloat. When I that stare disconnects I become a sinking boat in a sea of infatuation. Thinking of the possible relations we can have, but for now ill just settle for appearance

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Date: 4/22/2012 8:59:00 AM
love the humour - awesome piece, my friend
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:33:00 PM
Ah pulchritude, that's a descriptive synonym for comeliness that I have not seen in awhile. This is a very adroit description of such a resplendent beauty. Surely this one you will not let float by on that cloud? Fine poetry my friend, thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/19/2012 10:14:00 AM
Lovely beautiful poem Elliott
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Date: 4/19/2012 2:26:00 AM
Sounds like a '10'... wonderful description... Terry
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